Here is what I like:
The miracle of love is
that love is given to us
to give to one another
Angela Nicole Hatley
and
Brandon Michael Laws
together with their parents
invite you to shae
a day of happiness
as they begin a life of love
Saturday, the first of August
Two thousand nine
Six O'clock in the evening
Rock Creek Country Club
Hillsboro, Oregon
Reception Immediately to follow
here is what Brandon likes;
Happiness does not exist
unless it is shared
Angela Nicole Hatley
and
Brandon Michael Laws
Together with their parents
invite you to witness
the beginning of a life
full of love and joy
Saturday, the first of August
Two thousand nine
Six O'clock in the evening
Rock Creek Country Club
Hillsboro, Oregon
Reception Immediately to follow
we both dont want invites that just say, we invite you to our wedding this day this place this time and we definitely want it to say "together with our/their parents" So does anyone have any other ideas for us?
I also found this one online and like it
Together with our parents we invite you
to share our joy and support our love
as we are exchange vows and are united
in the commitment of marriage
SnowKate's full name
and
SnowMate's full name
Saturday, the thirtieth of April
two thousand and five
at five o'clock
Winery Name
Napa, California
Food and festivities to follow
heeeeeeeelp :-)
I for sure like yours better ange, but I would change "as they begin a life of love" to "begin their life as husband and wife" or "as they begin their life together".
ReplyDeleteI love yours Ange. It is very loving. Brandon's seems a bit harsh. No offense Brandon. And I also agree with changing "life of love" to "life as husband and wife" this is the only time that you can say that and I think it is an honor to be husband and wife.
ReplyDeleteGood Luck!
oooh I like your ideas. although what about as they become husband and wife. (become instead of life just because life rhymes with wife haha)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the help you two!!